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GFXVoid!
you seem like an awfully angry individual..are you ok?
holy shit! that beat is god damn rocking!! man "bum bum bada bum bum badadu.. bum mmm-mm boom.. bum badada bum bum buh-uh-um...bum bada bum ba bada bum.." man that ownz ^^
Creator of the GFXvoid Header......................................Retired GFXvoid Staff. Currently: Never Here
Boxed up anger has to get out somehow man, this is how i let it out. speaking of which, i'll do just that. Good job tho man
You write werry good, it is easy to "see" the story as I read it. As NxtDay said it has a nice rythm.
I personally think you stretched a little to find the rhyme on a couple of those lines. :|
my mind doesnt strech.......
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