[vector] Venomous

[Spekta]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/21461480/

Program used: Illustrator 10
Time taken: 7 hours
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Stock pic from http://www.kittenstock.deviantart.com

I had a fair bit of fun doing this, experimenting with lots of new things, i still have lots to learn

+favs and comments all greatly appreciated

[Maverick]

Well your deviantart link is busted, and your not supposed to give a link or hotlink images from them. Quit breaking the rules, please.

As for the vector, I think the bottom lip looks way fat, and the shading on the right part of the upper lip doesn't look right to my eyes.

[undertone]

No Deviant Art Links
youve got 24 hours to change it.
this is your first official warning from me.

anyway, looks good as always man, but i dunno about that hair. it looks as if its more like whool then hair, not enough shine if you know what i mean. and just under the lip, theres a line of shadow comming off of the shadow under the lip, may want to fix that. and on the lip its self, on the right side theres a shadow thats just sticking out from the rest of the lip, doesnt fit. looks more like a cold sore then a shadow. keep em comming.

[katgirl21]

nice job

i love the shading on the lips and eyes

rateing:

1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 / 10 *claps*



[edit]

(Why is it against the rules to put DA links?)

[undertone]

http://forums.gfxvoid.com/t-5406.htm

and there ya have it

[Xtremerunnerars]

some of your proportions are off...the eyes look a tad too large...and i think the hair could use a little more work. It does seem like you're improving though, keep trying!

[katgirl21]

Originally posted by undertone@11 Hours Ago
http://forums.gfxvoid.com/t-5406.htm

and there ya have it

[snapback]92319[/snapback]

Ok, thanks

That makes sence now

[Illegalx17]

It's awesome, but one thing. Under her left eye(the one that's on the left side of the pic) the shading is a little too big and too dark. Looks like shes tired.

[StockImage]

my only critique would be the teeth and her top lip. it looks as though her top row of teeth are in bad need of some professional dentistry and the shading on the right side of her top lip is off a little but besides that its another good piece, keep up the good work

[Daemon_]

Originally posted by katgirl21@20 Hours Ago
(Why is it against the rules to put DA links?)

[snapback]92315[/snapback]

Competition They are taking our members, we hope to have a DA system up in the future. Please change ASAP Spekta, thanks for your co-operation, have a nice day. If you want me to re-upload for you just PM me.