Chaos Within

[Zeyne]

[undertone]

that text looks nice, a bit hard to read, and could have been in a better location, so it just doesnt look so random. also the link under it is hard to read, it also sands out WAY too much. as for the rest, did you make that render your self? if so very nice job. if not, pass on my compliments. the brushing looks alright, could use some work to make it go infront of the render, as well as go behind it.

keep working at it!

[Xtremerunnerars]

woah, first of all, that color has to go. Second of all, make it brighter (assuming you used photoshop, edit>adjustments>brightness/contrast) Thirdly, work on the text's color, make it somewhat contrasted to your background...work on the font too. Nice effort though.

[Zeyne]

yes i did the render, and the bg in c4d..

the only brushing i did was the black you see, like it used to be all blue but the spots where it is black i used brushing on

ill fix the text

[Zeyne]

Heres what I came up with..