Gift 4 Twan

[RoughDraft]

alright finally got around to it sry for the delay twan :unsure: ... been bz this summer..this is 1st thing ive made in awhile turned out alright CnC plz

[DragonsRage]

it's kind of pixilated

[Freak]

It's also too dark for my taste.

[Aruix]

The colors make it seem a little too over saturated. Otherwise it seems okay, though its a little hard to make out.

[randyrandy]

Looks good except font.. =[ Also the beginning of the beam is to roundish...maybe it's supposed to be like that.

One other thing is the pixels..maybe choose another brush?

[RoughDraft]

lol i aint worryin bout ti will use different brushes next sig thxs for comments