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    I've gone too far in this life
    I've given up on hope
    It's something easy to say
    But, all I'm left is broke

    I hear the words you say
    Everynight I close my eyes
    Trying hard not to make the best of this
    It's not you I despise (DESPISE)

    Make sure to sleep safely, I do everynight
    Under my pillow, is my sharpened knife
    Relieving the anger, with the tears in my eyes
    With these last words, god will you just let me die? (LET ME DIE, JUST DIE, JUST DIE)

    I've got the choice, of life and death (LIFE AND DEATH)
    So I scream out (RESCUE ME)
    Alone with my chance, to take my own life (OWN LIFE)
    The knife's in my hands (SAVE ME PLEASE)

    What is there really left for me, for me.

    Make sure to sleep safely, I do everynight
    Under my pillow, is my sharpened knife
    Relieving the anger, with the tears in my eyes
    With these last words, god will you just let me die? (LET ME DIE, JUST DIE, JUST DIE)

    I stroke the knife against my wrists (DON'T CONTROL IT)
    My wrists in blood, I won't stop this (DON'T SAVE ME)
    If only you could, see thses tears (THAT I'VE CRIED)
    With these last words (YOUR LAST GOODBYE)

    What is there really left for me, for me.

    Make sure to sleep safely, I do everynight
    Under my pillow, is my sharpened knife
    Relieving the anger, with the tears in my eyes
    With these last words, god will you just let me die? (LET ME DIE, JUST DIE, JUST DIE)
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    alot of emotion, good wording. I like it, how exactly would the beat go for this song? i kinda wanna make a guitar part for it lol.



  3. #3

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    It's different from the other songs I've written. The caps are supposed to be screaming, but the rhythm isn't something that I could tell you over the internet. But I really need to get a guitar soon.

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    hmm if you could maybe add me to msn i have a guitar i'd love to make a tune for this it's my style :P
    deaz\dxloa\dxedr



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