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[PSkid]

Ok well I was listening to rap all day and I was trying to get to sleep and its liek 4 in the morning and I got beats and lyrics running though my head so I had to write em down. And I came up with this lil rap...tell me what you think. There is no specific rhyme scheme but when I wrote it I had a mixture of eminem and ludacris's rap style if that makes any sense.

This place we call Void,
It's our own co-mmunity.
We got the best
And we got the worst.
But the best help the worst to get betta.

Erbody teachin erbody,
That's the way it should be.
Neva too good too learn,
and neva too bad too preach.

Erbody should teach.
And if you don't wanna preach,
Then you just, ain't no good.
Cuz if you don't wanna teach,
You ain't helpin the co-mmunity.
Your like a virus!
Tryin to break our immunity.
But its not gonna happen.
We to strong for dat.
That's rite I said STEP,
Before I let MaDD attack.

So what have we learned,
In this lil old rap?
If we all work togetha
The community strives.
But if we all derive
And do our own thing
The community dies.


Well thats the shit that was keeping me awake lol...
I had to get it outa my head and onto paper.
I don't know if it sounds good to everybody but its prolly how i put empasize on certain words and shit when I say it. Maybe ill make an audio file for everybody so it sounds good lol

[Infidel]

mmm stick to graphics m8 :P

[MartinBabies]

Hell yeah! XD
And now someone record it with a beat! xP

[dragoneye]

lol pskid u got a mic? :P

and rabies can make the music

[Atolar]

that'd be so sweet. haha. you guys should so record it.


nice lyrics man.

[NightStalker]

insane.. but record it still =D

[Daemon_]

Yeah, rabies is good at music production, you should collab on a song :lol:

[Dick]

taco will sing it

[Samuel]

Lol. Taco aint the best singer in the world man......lolz.

Good work mate. Pretty cool. Needs more ryhming tho...

[Dick]

Originally posted by bigfatguy6969@4 Minutes Ago
Lol. Taco aint the best singer in the world man......lolz.

Good work mate. Pretty cool. Needs more ryhming tho...

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i just wrote it, cause sometime ago taco posted here some of his "rap" :lol: