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My eyes cried a river
God how it swept
Along the curves of the bank
As this heart of mine wept like a willow
the wind swayed
Billowing branches cast shade
On the part of my tainted soul that remains.
Still engulfed to this day.
open my arms wide to pray.
Please if you hear me,
Let the sun shine today.
I cant live life this way.
Afraid...
Of our next big fight.
to sleep alone another night.
To say things that just might
Help ignite a bigger flame.
Put it to the L and inhale.
Marinate my lungs then exhale,
thinkin to myself that I just failed.
Put my soul up on the shelf
Feel my body burn in hell.
But my soul well,
Its not for sale.
This Queen will rise and prevail.
I got demons we all do I cant lie
I smoke, I swear, I scream, I get high.
Talib put it best cuz its just to get by.
But I know the most high can see how I try.
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Hey, Well like i already told you. in my opinion. this is your best work yet.
I really love this. You best write more. cuz i like your work.
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I'm falling in love with your work, day by day, it's been a while since i've been to the non-visual section seems how school started, but I'm back lol and i hope i hear more from you.
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aww thank you ilovecoheed =)
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