Angreal.se

[jerner]

Me and my friend is currently working on this website, called Angreal, which is going to be an interactive roleplaying-site. This is a work in progress, and this is the public frontpage, made by me. Screenshot. maybe you want to give me/us some critique or comments?

Public PAGE

I haven't added the text to it yet, since we're going to do that while coding the page.
(I updated it. changed the shadow)


© Jerner/Angreal 2005

[1337elite]

The shadow of the guy is too sharp, maybe blur it a bit?
I don't know how you guys are gonna do it but i say one thing.
Don't use iFrames or frames... Make it a template instead.
If you make it in flash it'll be sick!

[jerner]

it's going to be made in psp. roger, I'll edit the shadow

[Twan]

Lookin good so far! I like the grungy feel and the drawing is very nice (which I know you drew) I think you should put some grungy design around the box just to fill up the space. Nice work!

[jerner]

thank you Twan maybe I should add something more. But I'll leave it like this for now, since it's just the frontpag/public page, and we've already started coding this. It's suppose to be clean and neat, and the whole bg is going to be the same color, duh. thank you guys for commenting

[jerner]

no more comments ? :'(

[unit_number_43]

looks really good i think. It'll look great with just plain old black text as the content/links as well, which is great.

I think the only issue I see is the size. You should test it out on an 800x600 resolution once you've coded it in to make sure it's viewable as 800x600 res uesers as they account for a good chunk of your average audience. I haven't check it myself, so it may fit fine without adjustment.

[jerner]

wow, thanks. It all means a lot coming from you and all
yeah, that's true. I'm going to check it out when the coding is all done. Thanks again.

As said, this is only the public page. There will aslo be a private page where you "do" everything , which will be similar to this but with a few changes and bigger, more coding ..

[Spekta]

Did you draw the picture?

[robgasm]

yes he did, one of his many mediva warrior uber dudes :P