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[natso]

hi guys, just vectored my first image.. i p,anned leaving the rims for last, but the rims where so ugly and i kind of digged the no-rims.. anyway here it is.. when you open it u have to click on the image to sharpen it... dont know why this is but C&C plz

http://img378.imageshack.us/my.php?i...herleft8qh.jpg

[iceryu]

more details would be nite. cool thou. maybe adding a black dude riding it

[Runch]

I really like this........but more detail would be nice...GOOD WORK

[natso]

wow.. didn't think people would like it.. i will add more details thanks for C&C. black dude is good idea

[undertone]

needs more detail, more work on the shading and highlighting. really good job for your first though. and i dont like the bg colour, just does not fit with the rest of it.

[natso]

ok thanks allot i think the BG should just be plain white.. ill post it in a sec..

[CrazyGamer]

Tiss a good idea. If no one else is going to say it then i will. Smooth lines just tend to look better then rough lines if you know what i mean. Expecially in work like this. It is good for a start. You should seriously try to learn to use the pen tool or the lasso tool. That was the lines will actually be smooth and look good.

[RoughDraft]

i like it...id say add a bg like him on a road goin somewhere i dunno haha..yea deff add some1 on it..try to make some rims for it...ask some vector artist for some help maybe..pm some maybe they wont mind..on bikes aint there more goin on on the handle bars? and maybe add a darker gray on the front fender..just some suggestions overall nice job love it.

[natso]

ok guys, im working on it but its not doing what i want.. a got rid of the BG and it does look better, take a look..

going to make a chick on it or something i know someone to ask for help

thanks allot for C&C guys

http://img387.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p...herleft29kl.jpg ( once again click once on img after load.)

[undertone]

the tires are really messed up, you cant see the other side of them, or through the hole in them, and parts of it are messy, like the belt and the rear fender has the shadow overlapping the lighter part. also while some parts have reflections, some parts just have no shadow or highlight at all, which makes the perspective skew a little. nice work though, just keep up at it.