Forebodings

[makibird]

'Aagragaah,' said Detritus, mournfully.
'Don't mind me, just don't spit it on my boot,' said Vimes.
'It mean–' Detritus waved a huge hand, 'like... dem things, what only comes in...' he paused and looked at his fingers, while his lips moved'... fours. Aagragaah. It mean lit'rally der time when you see dem little pebbles and you jus' know dere's gonna be a great big landslide on toppa you and it already too late to run. Dat moment, dat's aagragaah.'
Vimes's own lips moved. 'Forebodings?'
'Dat's der bunny.'
'Where does the word come from?'
Detritus shrugged. 'Maybe it named after der soun' you make just as a t'ousand ton of rock hit you.'
'Forebodings...' Vimes rubbed his chin. 'Yeah. Well, I've got plenty of them...'
~ Terry Pratchett - Jingo

[randyrandy]

1) I don't like the white reflection on the water, too patchy like
2) The mountain in the BG seems too bright, or something like that.
3) I don't like the really cyan like color in the sky..maybe just make it less visible..

Nice job though,

[Oblivion]

The render itself is fuckin amasing, but the closer of the 2 mountains is a tad bright, also the shore is fcked up...Alot. Its green than 3 pxls later its hard brown.

[makibird]

I know, Ob, I was having problems with the &#39;waterline&#39;. I couldn&#39;t get it to go any lower without not being seen, which sucks >.<
The white isn&#39;t reflection, but foam ^.^ And yeah, the mountains are too bright, I couldn&#39;t do much to them without postworking, and I don&#39;t like postworking terrarenders apart from a sig/border/level correction >.< Feels to me like cheating. Thanks for your feedback guys