Only comment I have is the render is a bit dark, it causes my eye to bring the light portion to the front, and it messes with my depth perception on the sig. The brushing behind the fire, which is very good BTW, seems to be in the distance and therefore the fire looks to be far away, but then the render being dark backs off behind the fire band, giving it a bit of an optical illusion.
Other than that I like it. Love the brushing, love the way the text blends, and love the fire band.
i love the fire, but to the right of it, it looks a little bit bland for me....maybe brush with some other colors (dont know which ones) but im sure you can find some colors and the render is a bit too dark, make it lighter and blend it in..
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