illumination

[Moshiur]

Took me about 6 hours to finish this. I was trying to gather my thoughts while making it. Comments appreciated.

Link:

http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/8...ination3eu.png

[masokist]

its pretty good. . .try and blend the brushin over the render in a little bit more though, so you can see some of the render in the middle. . .also, brush a little bit outside of everything instead of there being so much "dead" space

[Moshiur]

Thx for the help m8. I'll see what I can do about those empty spots.

[DragonsRage]

Just wow! I reall like it. all i can say is you should have made the 3D render in the back a little more random.

[undertone]

just as maso said, brush some more around the edges to fill 'er up. also try and make more of a centerpeice for this, kind of hard to tell whats going on when the center is all white. nice text, fits well, but maybe a de-saturated red would do well to fit the font with the rest better. maybe try working in more colours too, might end up looking a little nicer good work.

[Moshiur]

Thx DR and undertone. I'll see what I can do about the colors. The center of the piece is supposed to be bright and white because of the name of the piece.

Definition:

il·lu·mi·na·tion Audio pronunciation of "illumination" ( P ) Pronunciation Key (-lm-nshn)
n.

1.
1. The act of illuminating.
2. The state of being illuminated.
2. A source of light.
3. Decorative lighting.
4. Spiritual or intellectual enlightenment.
5. Clarification; elucidation.
6.
1. The art or act of decorating a text, page, or initial letter with ornamental designs, miniatures, or lettering.
2. An example of this art.
7. Physics. The luminous flux per unit area at any point on a surface exposed to incident light. Also called illuminance.

Thanks for the other pointers though.

[Illegalx17]

Eh, it's alright. Needs some work though. Too monotone, neeeds some 2d, and the text needs work. I saw this on Core as well, welcome there .

[Daemon_]

I agree with illegal, too monotone. Very rough indeed on the background. The brushing isn't bad providing its not a brush pack someone else made. Keep working on it, your getting there.

[Moshiur]

Wait a min catalyst. That's brush pack isn't mine. I don't want to take the credit for someone else stuff. Sorry I didn't state that before. I have so many brushpacks that I forget which ones I used.