Why?

[xane]

I cant feel anything
a pool of blood on the floor
when i ask myself why
I think about whats on the other side
My heart slows and my thoughts dwindle
I see a light on the other side, engulfed in flames
Im going to hell and i cant even feel the pain.

Thoughts..unleashed

[ilovecoheed]

effin' A scotty lol

that's a good poem, kinda paints a picture in your mind as poems are supposed to.

keep on writin

[xane]

Thanks man

[Samuel]

Good ideas, just need to get better words to more fully express those thoughts.

[ilovecoheed]

Originally posted by bigfatguy6969@7 Hours Ago
Good ideas, just need to get better words to more fully express those thoughts.

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Yes, i agrree.