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  1. #1
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    Alright before you read this.......it will get alittle confusing if you dont read it how i wrote it..which is to a beat i had stuck in my head......

    just read it how you will


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    Underneath my skin there is a place I hide.

    Trapping all my fears and pain inside.

    Taking breaths to breath.

    Relax is what I say to me.

    In your eyes I see it’s breaking us apart.

    Understand when I say you must stop don’t even start.

    You don’t care

    What’s there.

    You just want it freed.

    But when I cry I don’t shed tears instead I bleed

    Blood dripping drops from my eyes.

    You watch the red river of pain flow with my sighs.

    What you need to do is give me space.

    Underneath it all is a crazy place.

    But somehow its chained restrained tied up tight.

    Keep on with your games I will not win this fight.

    You have to lose this war or me.

    The monsters bite and rip flesh burn my eyes with lies that only I can see.

    If I open the door and expose my shadowed hole.

    I cant help you stop resist the demon soul.

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    Wow!!


    That's amazing man. I really liked it. Definatley shows, how one's persons "demons" can affect another. Really good work mate.

    I'm lovin' it!

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    Thanks BFG. Any1 else have anything to say? any1?

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    Nice man...sorry i don't have much to say i'm really pissed at my school right now.

    good job and definately keep writing.



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    Originally posted by ilovecoheed@A Minute Ago
    Nice* man...sorry i don't have much to say i'm really pissed at my school right now.

    good job and definately keep writing.
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    thanks man........

    Do you need to cry on my shoulder?.....i am a good listener......as long as we spoon when were done....... :| so ver strange i know..........


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    I'm going to have to decline your offer. lol... you da man runch.



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    haha alright man......just remember the offer is on the table........hahahaha..........and i know im the man.......kinda

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