NeuroSphere

[Whitegecko]

Im really sorry i havent been on in a LONG time, just with college i have hardly any time left, but anyways, i made this about 2 weeks ago because i'm not very good at making renders, so i decided to start learning.
What you guys think for first attempt? Oh and my idea of it is:
To beams of electrical energy colliding in outer space, forming a bang. The spike balls i thought to be a small amount of energy escaping before then collision, whilst the spikes on the collision is extra energy escaping. The beams bending are because like forces repel and i thought of it been the repulsion of the beams. Anyway, enough of me blabbering on .. whats your opinions?
Thanks!
WG

[hell_bound_soul]

Generally I like the overall idea... but some of it is very choppy. If you could try smoothing it out, then I think it would be better.

Overall: 7/10

[Whitegecko]

Yeah i see what you mean, when its full size it does seem smoother though, if i give you the link to see it full size it may be better, but thanks!
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/3...osphere1xi.jpg
WG

[hell_bound_soul]

Yeeah. That looks alot better. The full sized version seems better than the one before it. I still think that there is something off about it though... so its more like a:

8.5/10

[Whitegecko]

Thanks, yeah it could do with some work, but hey, a little work and i think it will be good for me
WG

[Daemon_]

Waw, really like the idea behind it, the concept is the most important thing about art, also how you've represented it is interesting. Bit choppy as hell_bound mentioned, but its quite good, try making the text white with a blue outer glow with linear dodge, and it should spice it up.

[Ben]

I like it! it sort of looks like the main sphere thing is moving... or is that me going blind?

[Whitegecko]

Yeah...i like the idea of white text with blue outer glow, it would fit the scheme of the bright white explosion.
Thanks CC, will alter it and re-post asap.

[Whitegecko]

Hey Ben, i didnt see it like that until you said, i supose it does appear to be moving!
WG