My Card

[natso]

hi guys,
C&C please.
not for professional. use, just for fun but dont let that spoil your usefull tips

[Ben]

Its very empty and dark, Change the text to a lighter colouro r maybe add a small white outer glow.
Put something in the BG like maybe a very faint gradient.
How long did it take like 4mins? If it was for a business or something it wouldn't get a lot of attention but theres not a lot of things wrong with it just not a lot of things right with it either.

[natso]

it took like 5 mins to make indeed, took a bit longer to come up with though. i want to keep it simple but not boring, guess its to boring. dont want to make a busy card with thingy's and such in it. ill try to change the txt color and add a glow and see what that does, thanks for comment

[Ben]

Yeah it might be because the sun is shining on my screen why it looks so dark.

[natso]

maybe, it is quite dark but not extreemly in my eyes. maybe someone else could comment on the darkness just to be sure. anyway i added some minor changes:

http://img494.imageshack.us/img494/8454/kaartje2sx.jpg

[Ben]

Definatly better maybe the outer glow was a bit too much not sure.

I really like the way you joined the h up to i, thats nice :P

[natso]

haha i like the outer glow. on the doodle on the left. not to sure on the glow on the text.

[Ragidy_man]

the thing which connects the 'h' t the 'i' doesnt align properly so i would fix that and mabey change the background but apart from the h and the i thing it looks alright

[natso]

yeah i noticed that and fixed it.. and i distorted it a bit.
i think it looks cool but might be a bit to..out of place i guess

[Roy]

You should do an outline of a table, now that it's sideways it looks like it should be laying on a table.