Autumn poem

[Fro]

hey guys...i've had some shit goin on in my life lately and i had to write a poem for a class. BliZZ told me it was pretty good so here it goes:

[FONT=Arial]Sitting on the porch on an autumn night
Listening to birds call
All of your problems become small
The Sun sets out of sight

Amidst this bliss of an atmosphere
You realize nature’s confounds
Surrounded by its sights and sounds
Everything becomes so clear

Wishing this moment would never end
You realize it must begin
Your thoughts of what could have been
And everything becomes dark again



hope you enjoyed.

[Runch]

Very good job man, i really enjoyd that. /clap keep it up.... i would like to read more by you.

[Samuel]

I agree, very well done!

[ilovecoheed]

That was great man! Keep it up!

[katgirl21]

*big round of applause* nice poem!

[BLiZZ]

yea man - great work ! i really wanna read some more - keep writing - cya monday :P

[sundae]

cool! Good job! My poems always turn out awful...

[Roy]

Very nice man, you got a way with words. I'd like to read more from you.