Heart of the Beast

[Moshiur]

Havn't made a piece in a while. I wanted to do a lot with this piece, but I don't know if I did enough.

Original Version

Smaller Version

Hope you like. Please give comments.

EDIT: Updated Version

[Roy]

I like it. The render has the outward explosion effect, that's pretty nice.

The techish stuff on the side could be moved over to the edge though.

good job.

[Moshiur]

Thx for the comment. I was on the phone with my friend and he was kind of saying the same thing. I was thinking of taking out some of the tech effects.

[Ragidy_man]

i'd take out the text effect if i was you cos i dont see what their there for but they look alright

[Moshiur]

Originally posted by Tetsuo@7 Minutes Ago
i'd take out the text effect if i was you cos i dont see what their there for but they look alright

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do you mean the tech effects?

[masokist]

its good. i like it, the colors are great, but maybe not so much dead black space. maybe fill it with some subtle brushes possibly, nothing major, but just the subtle differences that make a piece.

[Moshiur]

Yea I was kinda thinking of lowering the amount of tech effects on the left. They kind of look too heavy and out of place. But if I were to add a few subtle effects, what can I add? Can you give me a few examples so I can get an idea? Please. Thx for the comment.

[masokist]

my thinking there, is just some more *bang* and kinda the cloudy stuff that goes well with abstract renders and such like that. nothing major and not covering the main attraction, but some to fill up dead space. it looks good as it is now, but there isnt enought to really make your eye wander around looking for the subtleties, wondering what else is there (if that made sense). even just some simple tech brushes, on their own layer with a LOW LOW opacity.

i like the tech on the left though, i like the repeating of the main, that looks good. maybe move it to the right a couple pixels to help fill space.

those are my thoughts at least.

[Moshiur]

I think I get what you mean. Thx alot. I'll try to fix up some of the stuff.
More Comments please. I'd like to get some more of views and thoughts on this.

[masokist]

^^ glad i could be of some help. it may not work out like i am thinking in my head, but those are just my thoughts. thanks for 'listening' to them (kinda cant listen through the computer usually :P )