Dragons overcome!

[Umbee]

THis is my first creation for this section, CnC on how to improve or just anything thanks!

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/6...gonlair4cm.jpg

[Wouwousoft]

Very nice man! I like it a lot... Altough I don't like the text and the purple on the right corner...

Very nice job man! Keep them comin'!

[Ragidy_man]

pretty cool but mabey make the stroke around the text a lighter shade so it blends in to the background still pretty amazin

[masokist]

its ok.

i like it for the most part, but the wind filter needs to go. use the smudge tool or somthing for that. i really like the brightness and colors, but they dont 'always' go together real well. some areas seem 'slapped' together.

the text at the top right needs to go, fast. it really throws off the rest of the image.

and the dragon on the left is way to blurry, it doesnt look good at all.

maybe try blending in the renders a little better, just make them a little softer. select all the dragons, feather of about 2 px, select inverse, and delete.

and the kinda random fractals or spikey 3d renders, need to go as well. they do not look good, maybe just mess with their blending modes to help out and make them blend into the rest better, and add some contrast more than just 'being' there. (the black fractals that is)

and save at a better quality, the pic has some pixelated spots in it that do not help anything

hopefully you read what all i had here, and hopefully it helped, there is a lot of promise there, it just needs a little more work.

i do not write this to be a dick, but only to help you get better, and those who have been around gfxvoid for a while, know that i do this from time to time, and some think i do it to be a jerk, but really i just want to see you get better, and those are things i notice that could be done to help in that.

thanks for your time, and i would love to see it if you took some of my suggestions and changed some things.

thanks

m

[Umbee]

Thanks maso ill try ur things out thanks man

[dragoneye]

meh.... umm...

To me it All looks like its been slapped together.
You have only made the background on this and that is the worst part of this piece.

but...
masokist did point out most of the things, i cant think of anything more.

[sofa]

I agree with masokist, the wind filter really bothers me. Especially the part that gets on one of the dragons face.
The text I don't like that much, doesn't fit with the overall really and the left side looks a little blurry and pixelated.

Besides that, good work =) Not a big fan of dragons, but I bet it would look awsome without the wind