The sig itself is pretty cool, but I think the Vermillion text needs some work. Darken it to a little lighter than the background, and make it a bit smaller to fit in the bottom left hand corner. Other than that I also feel this is a good one, nice job mate.
the smudging looks a little too concentrated... needs to be spread more... not just in a little aura around the render... also the sig seems a little empty, i think the render could be bigger... have a medium to small size render with huge text is not the way to go... unless you want to stay at your current level of sig designing... anyways, the text is too gaudy and big, sticks out a bit too much
the smudging was done very well I think, but you should really do something different with the background... the gradient you have there is BORING! Even a radial blur might add a little more interest
If everyone cared and nobody cried...
If everyone loved and nobody lied...
If everyone shared and swallowed their pride...
Then we'd see the day that nobody died...
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text is too simple.. i like the smudging on the b.g reminds me of my smudging tut ..
i like the fact that you used this type of render and not like 3d-wannabe renders.. getting old..
good job man
wow vermillion this isn't yur usually style but i think it came out great.
the only thing i would change is the placement and style of the "vermillion" text....
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