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Thread: First attempt..

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    Hopefully a good one but i will let you guys be the judge of that. Its my first attempt at space art and i really need some C+C.

    Thanks everyone.



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    i'm actually confused by it. What is the black meant to be?

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    hey, that looks like some underwater cavern or something! *cool!*

    ditch the space art consept and make it an underwater cavern! add fish and sharks and stuff

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    I think it looks underwater except you (firstperson) are looking through a hole in a ship or something

    An error I noticed is on top of the light where the planet on the left is there is a brushing mistake where theres a solid diganol line

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    Thanks guys.. at first i actually thought it looked like water but i was like... s t f u .so yeah ill change the planets for alagae and make the light dimmer so it lookst like a sub.
    Thanks for the C+C, anyne else want to comment on this space art *scratch off* marine art?



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    wow hehe yeah i'd go with calling this an underwater piece hehe.. it's nice though
    deaz\dxloa\dxedr



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    thats pretty sweet looks almost like the black is trying to hold you back GJ

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