Love

[AntidotexXx]

Love
Thomas Velez

Love is patient, love is kind
love is respectfull but hard to find.
Love is beautiful, love is blind
love's the thing i want to find.

You dont believe my words are true
but love is what i really want from you.
Love is weird, sometimes surreal
you might not think its a big deal
but true love can never dissapear.

Love is powerfull but all too dangerous
It's like a road, it has two ways
for bad, for good... it all depends.
You made your choice,
you broke my heart.

Im like a rose past its prime
An empty canvass, a heartless soul
Brokenhearted and disregarded i write this note
For love is corteous and also polite
but it's an emotion i sometimes dislike.

[DrksYd665]

thats pretty kewl man thats deep

[Ben]

My first time in this forum

Good job man a few things here and there like

You dont believe my words are true
but love is what i really want from you.

Would sound better like

You dont believe my words are true
but love is what i want from you.

But i know hacj shite about poems

[katgirl21]

wow, that was amazing :wub:

i like the feeling and the emotion

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Stuff to change:

*work on your spelling :P

*change "love is respectful but hard to find", to "Love is (insert new word here), yet hard to find"