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  1. #1
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    Unhappy

    Love
    Thomas Velez

    Love is patient, love is kind
    love is respectfull but hard to find.
    Love is beautiful, love is blind
    love's the thing i want to find.

    You dont believe my words are true
    but love is what i really want from you.
    Love is weird, sometimes surreal
    you might not think its a big deal
    but true love can never dissapear.

    Love is powerfull but all too dangerous
    It's like a road, it has two ways
    for bad, for good... it all depends.
    You made your choice,
    you broke my heart.

    Im like a rose past its prime
    An empty canvass, a heartless soul
    Brokenhearted and disregarded i write this note
    For love is corteous and also polite
    but it's an emotion i sometimes dislike.




  2. #2
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    thats pretty kewl man thats deep

  3. #3
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    My first time in this forum

    Good job man a few things here and there like

    You dont believe my words are true
    but love is what i really want from you.

    Would sound better like

    You dont believe my words are true
    but love is what i want from you.

    But i know hacj shite about poems

  4. #4
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    wow, that was amazing :wub:

    i like the feeling and the emotion

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    Stuff to change:

    *work on your spelling :P

    *change "love is respectful but hard to find", to "Love is (insert new word here), yet hard to find"

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