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[rocket2234]

I'm still thinking of changing some of the lyrics though.
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[VERSE 1]
So you think you could break
You think you could break
Well I'm here right now
And it's not looking too good
This is our time
Our time to make it last
And if we've given
Good times and great goodbyes
Nothing's forgiven
We need to make it last
Our happy ending, was nothing close to this

[CHORUS]
So we need, need to see
An end to this (END TO THIS)
For all we know (FOR ALL WE KNOW)
This could be our last (OUR LAST)

[VERSE 2]
This wasn't how
How it was before
Am I just an excuse
For something that's fading away
Tonight I wished
Wished upon so many stars
To tear up the pieces
This is just haunting me
Nothing you can do
And we've been caught in the act
Our happy ending, was nothing close to this

[CHORUS]
So we need, need to see
An end to this (END TO THIS)
For all we know (FOR ALL WE KNOW)
This could be our last (OUR LAST)

[BRIDGE]
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[VERSE 3] - WORKING ON IT STILL (NEED TO PRACTICE)
Come here and fix me up (I'VE TRIED, I'VE TRIED)
These wounds won't heal so quickly (OH SO QUICKLY)
Cause emotions are running through my vains (DON'T LET ME)
The fallen all have their own reasons (THEY'RE NOT GOOD ENOUGH)
But they're not good enough, they're not good enough

[ilovecoheed]

Wow man i like this! What kinda band are you guys?

[rocket2234]

Post Hardcore, Screamo: I play keys, scream, and do vocals.

[Shamino]

We need more bands like the old ones: Ones that told stories through song. All I am seeing is recycled lyrics here.

[Heavens-Exile]

Great Song, really sounds kick ass

Originally posted by Shamino@3 Hours Ago
We need more bands like the old ones: Ones that told stories through song. All I am seeing is recycled lyrics here.

[snapback]145927[/snapback]

Naw, man if all we had were story songs then u would want "recycled songs", Plus while songs that tell stories are great and all its harded for a listener to relate to the song.

[Shamino]

Originally posted by Heavens-Exile@12 Hours Ago
Great Song, really sounds kick ass
Naw, man if all we had were story songs* then u would want "recycled songs", Plus while songs that tell stories are great and all its harded for a listener to relate to the song.

[snapback]145969[/snapback]

Possibly, but I find a way to relate to every old school song. Perhaps its my 'tragic' life, but I certainly can no problems O.o

[rocket2234]

I totally understand what you're saying Shamino. It's true that even though the lyrics many bands have written themselves, they are "recycled". So in my thoughts, I was thinking of making more "perspective" lyrics or "stories". But the problem with these "stories" is that they stray off from relation. The best way to use a story in lyrics is probably metaphorically.

And I could put my set of stories into lyrics, but I choose not to, for they aren't the greatest times I've been through.

[snap]

reply to thread name, how about "Our Last"?