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[jerner]

well. this is just a preview. I'm currently working on the background and the surrounding, which in the final result will be a ruined city with a few toxic, blue explosions. I'll post it when I'm done with it to get some critique and suggestions. Enjoy.

[ilovecoheed]

Whoa that's wicked awesome!! try to make the bulges in his muscles smoother/rounder tho cuz they are pretty jagged right now.


i can't wait to see the final image.

[nonsense]

whoa..thats pretty sweet, i see you've choosen my method on teeth, make way too many haha, i like though. and the coloring wins...cant wait to see it finished.

[jerner]

Originally posted by ilovecoheed@52 Minutes Ago
Whoa that's wicked awesome!! try to make the bulges in his muscles smoother/rounder tho cuz they are pretty jagged right now.
i can't wait to see the final image.

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Actually. I wanted the 'bulges' or shadows on everything to be rough and hard, - similar to the way they shade in comics. Maybe I'm not that good at it yet, but hold on, I'm getting there, this is just my first shot at it. That's why it's not smooth anyway, sorry to dissapoint you. I'm glad you liked it though, thank you very much!

nosense: Hahaha, maybe I have, although I used the method before I knew that you did ^^ I think it gave him a cool, beast-like look, which I thougth was cool. thank you for your kind words and you will have to wait - but just for a while ^^

[nonsense]

ya for my dumb challenge thing i originaly wanted to do him, but i like the dark image of batman too..also my first attempt at marvel dc whatever its called comic stuff....i like your inking by the way, im gonna have to add that to one of my drawings, im just spooked to ruin something..ill just have to make a drawing especially for it

[B][G K]

i see where youre coming from with this type of shading, but i don't think it requires all the extra ink lines. for example, on the raised arm, there is an excess of black ink lines that make the texture seem scaly like a fish. the rest looks great tho.

[jerner]

hehe you do that nonsense

B][G K: I see your point too, and I think you're right.
I'm greatful that you noticed and told me, I actually didn't bother that much 'til now - but that's a good thing

Thanks for the advise. I will try to get rid of the inklines, all except the oulines. I really belive that it will turn out nice

[tabloid]

dude once again, amazing piece!

aside from what's been said, i feel like the elbow should have a sharper a point to it. it looks almost like a tentacle rather than an arm. maybe im just looking at the angle wrong but to me it looks rounder than an elbow would be, bent like that.

other than that, awesome work, beautiful as always.

[Dutch-Soldier(nl)]

OMG i'm so jalous!!!!, really great, the bigger version of spiderman:P

[Morphius]

I think it really looks good, except from some few minor light's or something. But you have really improved both your art skills and colouring skills =).
Great work m8 .