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Thread: Suji Bachi

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    need some critiques so i know what to improve until next time
    you can also see it here... http://www.deviantart.com/view/28476097/

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    I saw your whole DA. I liked it very much and I think that was my most favorite piece out of there. It's very clean and has sort of a little bit of simplicity to it.

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    i saaw this on your DA account to theres some nice pieces too

    what software did you use to make ther render?

    anyhoo i like the bg is nice and make's the render stand out and the render it'self is awsoem but some of the edges look a little choppy imo
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    Originally posted by Ragidy_man@5 Minutes Ago
    i saaw this on your DA account to theres some nice pieces too

    what software did you use to make ther render?

    anyhoo i like the bg is nice and make's the render stand out and the render it'self is awsoem but some of the edges look a little choppy imo
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    the render is done in cinema 4d
    and yes i agree with the edges, but i didnt really know how to fix it... or maybe i just didnt have enough energy to do it..

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    I don't particularly like symmetrical renders.. but i like the way you've used this one, not many abstract c4d renders are in clean, crisp peices. I love the yellows and greys also , and the complete opposite with a super shiny render. Nice work. Maybe a kinda typical vector type blood splat behind the render. Nothing too bold though ^_^


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    you don't have to cram a peice of art full of stuff... minimalism ^_^ ^_^


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    Originally posted by Dale@13 Hours Ago
    you don't have to cram a peice of art full of stuff... minimalism ^_^ ^_^
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    agreed fully.

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    I like the way you presented this, normally I would use renders for energy art full and cluttered but I like the minimalistic look you have given this. Great job and great choice of colours.

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