the first one, the render is a bit pixelated, and also the black lines on the right hand side dont look right IMO, get rid og tht, also the reflection of the txt just looks outa place. otherwise its real good, the second one is beter, me likes . maybe make the txt a bit more visible. nice though
not gunna comment on the first one really... too much going on at once, and just makes the eye feel confused while looking at it.
as for the second one, i like it. very simple, but very effective. ive always loved that render, and the simple use of shapes really help it. nice work.
first one is a little crazy. to much stuff. blending needs some work. second is good. just not my favorite style though. Good overall work though. keep it up
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. maybe make the txt a bit more visible. nice though
