Web Tamplate in the making

[Ben]

Well this is half i was bored so decided to make a template and half creating a layout for my clan.

This is the top part and ignore the header thats just there untill i make one but please C+C on what i can improve on the header and what i should add to the template

And it will need a large space for videos but i will create a seperate template for that

Thanks,
Ben


P.S please don't just say, its bad or, its good, i need good C+C to improve it.

[TheFlashMan]

Personally I can't relate to this template, but it looks like some very modern-Knights of the Round Table Template, but its a bit dark. Maybe have a lighter background and a Design that depicts your clan? Like an engraved mark in stone, or something like that. Hopefully what I say help, but I'm still a noob at Critique xD

[Ben]

Update has been added to top post :P

Im not making it just for my clan because i know other people that need a template so when i have done all the basics ill add extra stuff for my clan and make it better and unique :P

Version 2:
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/701/screeniev13oh.jpg

50 views and 1 reply?

Im going elsewhere..
Harumph and good day sir

[TheFlashMan]

I like it. THE template is looking pretty shivy right now, but then again I don't have my glasses on and I am posting after staying up nearly all day, but that's beside the point ^_^.
Also, I have to agree with the whole A million views, no replies. People are getting lazy, and y Flash game hasn't recieved any news replies. Man, I'm going to ma a post for it in like 5 different plaes just ot get some replies. Have applied ot 3 other forums for opinions actually ^_^

[Ben]

Im now here for discussions only, i have *officially* Give up asking for C+C

[Redh3lix]

It's very difficult for people to comment at this stage tbh chap.

I'd just like to point out that if your designing the template for clan use in mind, it would be a good idea to take into consideration the amount of blocks with different content. For example TS (Teamspeak) communication block, team roster block, clan server status block etc etc etc. ADD more blocks to your template before expecting people to comment tbh. Sorry, but you DID ask for opinion and I hope I havn't upset you

With this in mind, the left hand "menu" block title is much to large imo.

[Ben]

Nope its fine mate :P

But its mainly for my clan and i know what they want :lol:

Slightly updated version and thanks for the C+C so far:

http://img448.imageshack.us/img448/2...eeniev15if.jpg

[TheFlashMan]

Looking Nice, though you might want ot maximize the size of thsoe buttons before you finish it, unless you have stuff that's goig under them. By te way, if you need someone to sapiff upi your website with sweet buttons and what not, I'm always avaible. I'm a noob-photoshopper still, but my Flash Skills are excellent. Give me holler if you want Flash added to the site ^_^

[Ben]

Will do and cheers

[SgtSwabs]

Ooooh looks tasty. But for some reason (maybe im colour blind) I dont think the orange text suits the grey background, its not completely clashing or anything but it just looks a bit out of place. Green always looks good with grey/black ect but a complete colour change might be a bit drastic?