Tempest

[Plague]

CnC pleas

[Tyson]

I don't like the render, its used way too much and you've made it too dark.
The background and text are fine, just change the render imo.

[DevilWithIn]

i disagree i liek the render it fits well

[undertone]

dont like the brushing at all. the render is very contrasted and saturated with colour, but the bg is the complete oposet... it just doesnt bode well. and again your text just kills the mood. try looking for some fonts at www.dafont.com or something.