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Thread: Spacepic

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    This is my second spacepic (my first one sucked a whole lot of ass), so don't blame me if it sucks :P

    I won't put the picture here, because it'd kill the h-scroll, so I'll give a link to it:

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/33237873/

    zoom in or else it looks like shit.

    EDIT By Dale: Changed link. I hope i put it to the right artwork :P
    LOOKS LIKE I SPILLED SOME AWESOME IN YOUR DRINK



    ^Clicky for my dA

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    planets look flat, dont like the bunches of big glowing stars grouped together, needs more depth, lighting seems a bit off, and the bottom two plants' textures look bad =\

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    dam that took ages to load <_<

    not bad but there looks to be too many stars some of which look a little fake especially the ones with the lines coming out of them

    the planets could also use some work i.e. the texture and blending

    and the 3 small galaxies dont look to good imo but the large one does just poor placement

    not bad but work needed
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    It looks alright to me. But like the other guy said, there is probably a little bit to much stars. But hey&#33; Over all it looks Good&#33;

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    well, it&#39;s only my second spaceart, so I didn&#39;t expect perfect reviews. Thanks guys, I&#39;ll take all that into consideration if I ever plan on making another spaceart...

    btw, about the stars with lines attatching them, they&#39;re like that on purpose, I was trying to go for a kinda semi-realistic look with this
    ...if that makes any sense

    and Dale, yeah, you gave the right link.


    EDIT: Just to make it a bit more clear, by "semi-realistic" i mean, some parts look realistic, and then some parts don&#39;t...
    LOOKS LIKE I SPILLED SOME AWESOME IN YOUR DRINK



    ^Clicky for my dA

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    i like some parts of it but some parts aren&#39;t that good. as rabies said the planets are pretty flat. try spherizing the texture of the planets. that would make it much much better. also remove those lines between those stars in the red part... it looks weired. also way too many stars.... reduce the number of those bright stars at top.
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