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Thread: Moonlit Candle

  1. #1
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    A poem about a nightmare I had. Thanks for reading ^ ^

    <div align="center">Moonlit Candle

    As the candles blow o u t
    you dream more
    laying,
    resting in a field crowded with trees
    that dance as the wind
    walks along the surface
    I&#39;m waiting for it
    just listening as the moonlight
    turns everything blue
    dark figures creep among the trees
    unlike me they do watch
    |
    There was one time-
    I had camped out in the woods much like these
    where blinded by fabric I could only listen
    waiting for the return of my sister
    who stole my only source of light
    as I sat in darkness I could hear the sound of wind
    sweeping the trees and moonlight shadows
    prancing through the fabric
    they haunted my sleep that night
    when I awoke my sister rested beside me with that light

    My sister did not appear in this dream-
    just shadows and blurred unrecognizable shapes
    sounds like distant crowds of mumbling people
    and most importantly the moonlight
    reaming lit in this forest of darkness
    evil and hellish in nature
    predators waiting for me to move,
    to breath
    Feeling their eyes glowing upon me
    Hearing their claws scrape the dry earth
    Sensing their hatred for that moon
    and it’s reassuring light cloaking over us all

    As for the eclipse-
    when the moon runs away
    and darkness drapes the land
    that is when I dream the very most...</div>

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    I love your word-choice. The ending is also very good. Loved it&#33;

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    thanks very much, glad you loved it ^__^

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