New Halo Sig, please comment

[Engage]

hey yo... this is my most recent sig... please give me n e tips that could help. ty for your time /10 and also tell me how can i put my sig on this site without a dam link :s ty =P

[danielsaso]

too empty, needs a better text. render doesnt quite blend in
gj anyway

put [img]link here[/img]

[Engage]

ah kk ty

http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ge3copymq8.jpg

[Jeff]

The BG needs more depth. Try more layers. Also, while you want the render to blend in nicely with the background, don't make the BG look so similar to it that you hardly notice the render. In other words, try some other colors with the BG.

As for the text, the font could be better, but more importantly, it has readability problems. If you want an idea on how to fix that, try adding a white color overlay with 50% opacity in a blending mode that looks good (try normal, color/linear dodge, overlay, soft light).

Still, not bad at all. Keep us updated.

[Dale]

You had the wrong link. You need to use the one that only shows the image. Yours was a link to the image, on a web page.