No Sence Love Letter

[FaTTzZO]

i guess i have to do something about the left top corner!! critics & comments welcome

[Bradley]

I think you forgot something?

[L0neW0lfe]

lol i can't see anything

[FaTTzZO]

I think you forgot something?

i dont think so :P or dont know... =p

lol i can't see anything

is in spanish! and the letter has no sense, LOL

[CherryDreams]

They mean they can't see any picture/image or anything.

And I can't see anything either? Maybe you should try a different host or something? O__o;

[Jeff]

http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs11/i/200...by_FaTTzZO.jpg

That won't work. You just need to post the link to the work, not the actual jpg.

[FaTTzZO]

i fixed it, i dunno why i used the deviantart link :P, and about the topic, its SENSE. it was just an error while typing :P

[Ragidy_man]

i like it
i think it would add more meaning it the shot foccused around a certian word which did make sense

but still tweak it a little with the contrast

[dragoneye]

Twist the angle of the paper like 20-30 degrees so that you dont have to turn your head to look at it.
And the blur doesnt look very natural.
Other than those two its pretty cool, good idea too.

[Samuel]

I don't mind the idea, I just don't think you executed the idea too well.

Keep working! =)