First Animation

[Darkness-Consumes]

I know it's a little choppy

[CuBa]

face is not bledned. clouds are changing too fast. rain is ok
imo its not a good work, even on a 1st animation. if you work on smth. you can show a WIP (work in progress) for us, but work on it untill you will be happy from result.

and good luck with another works. keep goin' girl !

[Darkness-Consumes]

Ummmm....thanks. But...I'm a guy