play with the contrast some. its really dark. i actually think that the best part is your background. the "ink" doesnt look right (mess with the bevel levels). and agreed ^^ about the text. whats lacking is color (read: depth). play around, mess with it.
The idea of this piece is pure chaos, it's good that you don't like it. It's supposed to reflect the chaos that goes on in my mind sometimes. Hence no focal point. The question is basically me asking myself what the fuck is going on in my head.
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