New here, would like some constructive criticisms.

[Rhage]

Hi, everyone.

I'm new here, and I'm just wondering if you could give me any constructive criticisms or tips?

Thanks!

[dbroncos78087]

Wow thats pretty good, i like the pixel look you gave it, the dots on the top are pretty cool too. The colors seem to end on the right side, i dont think you should keep that. Overall its pretty nice.

[danielsaso]

the best thing would be the text, the rest just doesnt fit sry

[Deadloader]

I actually quite like it, it's definately following a nice tech-ish style there except for the secondary font which states, "Casey" though could be incorporated into your design if you were to perhaps merge some other things into there to extend on that classical looking font. More work needed i'd say but you're on the right tracks