Destiny II

[DomGatto]

I put a lot of work into this space scene, using everyone's advice to better it.

Time: 2 1/2 hours
Medium: Photoshop CS2



http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/42893116/

[DomGatto]

/bump
Yeah, this was a bit ignored.

[DomGatto]

Is bumping threads allowed on this forum?

[Moshiur]

Well since no one has commented, I guess it's reasonable for you to bump this. Everyone wants comments on their artwork.

Anyway, it's not too bad. Seems very basic. The planets seem a bit too flat. They need more...depth I guess. The textures can use a bit of work. Maybe you can try fooling around with the contrast of the textures and such. The stars are pretty nice, but maybe it would look better if they stood out a bit more. Overall, it's not too bad, but it's need more "candy." Something that grabs more attention. In one of your DA comments, you mentioned that you are working on "Destiny III." For "Destiny III", you should try having a better perpective. Meaning a change of scenery. Make the scenery look more epic or dramatic.

[DomGatto]

Well since no one has commented, I guess it's reasonable for you to bump this. Everyone wants comments on their artwork.

Anyway, it's not too bad. Seems very basic. The planets seem a bit too flat. They need more...depth I guess. The textures can use a bit of work. Maybe you can try fooling around with the contrast of the textures and such. The stars are pretty nice, but maybe it would look better if they stood out a bit more. Overall, it's not too bad, but it's need more "candy." Something that grabs more attention. In one of your DA comments, you mentioned that you are working on "Destiny III." For "Destiny III", you should try having a better perpective. Meaning a change of scenery. Make the scenery look more epic or dramatic.

Thank you for your feedback, I will definitely work on that for Destiny III