My first wallpaper

[jerner]

This is my first attempt at a wallpaper, I have made the character myself, (drawn), and I'll post that one later, but not here. tell me what you think of my wallpaper, don't really care to change it, did it for fun really.
edit: added text :P

[Samuel]

Humm.... it's different....yeah. Im loving the idea, but it's just not working. Dude im sorry i cant get my figer on whats different..

[jerner]

lol, maybe you're right. I think I know what's missing.
I forgot to add a text , I guess I didn't have time to make it. I'll update it tomorrow. And did I get my finger right? lmao

[Samuel]

Yeah no text ...DUH!! You did get your finger right...

[jerner]

Here is the UPDATED one, now with text , but I couldn&#39;t get it to look good :huh: <_< ,

[MartinBabies]

The lines of the character should be smoother. Apart from that, I really like it. It&#39;s cool and simple, just like a wallpaper should be.

[Dale]

I really like it , but the top doesn&#39;t seem right. I love the render how it is , and the centre wit the text looks awesome.

I can&#39;t think what it needs.... but it&#39;s still good.


8.6/10 - Nice colours & render

[jerner]

thank you for the critique rabieshund(en) And I think you&#39;re right about the simple part. That&#39;s why I did it simple/clean xP

and Crofty, thanks, what do you mean? is there something wrong with the upper part? then it should be something wrong with the lower part too :/ tnx anyway

[Dale]

I htink it&#39;s becuase the star brushing is beter down the bottom, that&#39;s all i thikn lol.

[Samuel]

I like it alot better now. It flows so well, those scanlines rule