Online portfolio intro splash

[neogfx]

This is going (hopefully) to be the intro splash for my online photography gallery. I really need some good critique as this will be the first thing prospective clients will see when they visit my website.
So tell me what you like, what you don't like, suggestions, critique.
Cheers.

[Bradley]

An honest critique would be not to have a splash page. Just send right to the show. You have a full portfolio for a reason.

The critique you probably want is the photograph looks great. Black and white suits the shot very well, you have an attractive model (just my personal opinion), and portraits I find to be the most difficult shot to take successfully. If you're looking to be a portrait photographer you made a good choice.

[neogfx]

Thanks for the crit. Portrait photography is hopefully where I'm headed. I find it a lot more interesting than a lot of other types of photography.
Thanks again.