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  1. #1
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    Default You're Nothing But A Relapse.

    I named this piece after the local Newfoundland band Cyprian's song that they released on their EP. It was entitled Relapse as you could guess. "You're nothing but a Relapse." Was the opening line to the song.

    Anyway, enjoy the piece.


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  2. #2
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    i like it, but tone down the sharpness i think the contrast of the c4d is enough already, other than that the composition and the font are great!
    Throughout life advance daily, becoming more skillfull than yesterday, more skillfull than today...this is neverending...Hagakure


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    Thanks alot. I didn't sharpen the image though. =\ It must be just a sharp render or something.

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  4. #4
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    That looks cool as hell. could I use it in a sig?


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  5. #5
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    Sure you can, credit me and show me the results.

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  6. #6
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    From the looks of it, you seem to make good renders, but I think you need to work on the
    photoshop / post-work a bit more. The background seems to be nice but the contrast on
    the render is a bit too much. When you do your post work, try to duplicate and play
    around with the render a bit more. Add effects to the duplicated render and such.
    Overall, you did a decent job on this but I think you can do a lot better since making
    renders aren't your problem.

  7. #7
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    The main critisism I have for this piece is the shiny glowly bits, where they go thin, they are too sharp. The edges in general need some anti-aliasing. Give it that and maybe a larger blur on the glow and then re-sharpen and it should look ok.

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