Rate + Comment plz

[Xelis]

Any comments or ideas for improvement?

[-Kanji-]

looks ok, too much open space though. 6.5/10

[sickvision]

yeah probably too empty...you might play with fonts in the empty area(not to much)

i like this ice/cold kind of look

[Illegalx17]

i like it, but yea too much open space and the render is too clear. BLEND it dont make it invisable lol.

[Oldeback]

yep, as Illegal said, make the opacity to 100 and blend him B) but i really like the part where your name are and i think the font is ok.

[jerner]

It's a quite clean and nice brushing you got in the backgorund, and the colors aren't that bad eighter. Don't like the render though, and how it got such low opacity :/, try to fill out all the empty space with a low-opacity/blended render, or just some text. I think you should keep working on this one, good job.

[2-intenze]

nice renders and blending but its way too plain (the middle is a big open space and thats not cool)

gj - (7.3/10)

[c@pt@in]

nice but why don't you try to put a kind of font in the middle of the pic?
or something more extreme...why don't you try to put a kind of rain or something like that(i mean animation....)????

[Xelis]

I took your advice and filled out the center with name and a nice brush i found, without over filling the center and blended the render. Is this better, worse?

[sickvision]

better