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[superdezign.com]

ok I made some changes. Any more suggestions? is this better or worse?



Also, I need some comments on the selection of green I used. What do you guys think? good or bad?

[Tastyfish]

i like the overall layout except the "bar" going across the page wich is.. too hightlighted.
and the green curled paper just doesnt work with the overall layout :S.
the super!design logo should be with only one word in a saturated color. atleast i think so, that will put more emphasis on that word.

other wise i like the layout with the lightgreen/white header and the right side of the bottom part.

[unit_number_43]

Even closer to perfection this time. You're getting the hang of it. Right now this would be a good design, and any critiquing I do will be purely tweaking to make it "perfect" (perhaps perfect in my own mind alone).

The horizontal bar on top... try changing it to the blue that is in your logo. It will act as a nice seperation. Move the logo up about 10px, there is just a little too much white space up there still. And change the note to a brownish/yellow paper color. The note is the only thing I really think *needs* to be changed.

All around great job, you went from a generic design that looked stagnant and disjointed and created a well balanced vibrant layout that actually interests the reader and stimulates the eye without overpowering it. Well done.

[superdezign.com]

Could not have done it without your help adam! really appreciate it

[Dale]

Wwell... it's not that. i just don't like the use of the word can twice.

the latyour is pretty nice, although a little too green.

I really like the super dezign text though

[Virtue]

Very nice work man! That high of praise from 43 really means something. I love the look.