Blue Sky Morning

[Brick]

Probably another WIP I'll never finish, but it's nice to try something out again.

[Dale]

s'aight man. I like the photo in there
If iw ere you i'd add a few highlights or something on the blue background, just where it meets the clouds... idk xD

I would never be detailed enough to pen tool that many spikes in my hair xD
His body is pretty damn long, lol.

[mannos]

this looks really nice
i cant really think of anything to change/add to it tbh, very nice work

although... i've just noticed that the line between the sky and the blue is very bumpy. maybe cut that straight

[Brick]

Here's the original, I used the arrangement, placing, and the corner sky, but nothing more. I wanted to make the blue thing look more like a ruined wall, and I might do that today. Last night I was trying to add cracks, but I kept on messing up the pressure on my tablet. I was losing sleep over the damn thing last night, taking shortcuts everywhere. I'll touch it up today.

[Deadloader]

yeah it's not so obvious it looks like randomly placed sky which doesn't make sense unless you pick out more of the detail, which i don't like. Except maybe you could highlight the guy a bit more with shadows and outline's and if you're going to do outline's, don't do those thick line's in black.. make them like real thin with a colour that's a darker tone of the one you're doing, or lighter depends on the direction of light practise with those maybe you could actually finish this and have a bloody masterpiece, good luck

[Brick]

Thanks, I just started on those things you mentioned. The heavy black line was taken out and I've started on trying to make it look more "wall-ish" by working on some grass down on the bottom, and a little perspective work on the wall itself.

[Henry]

yeah the wall needs perspective and shadows, it doesn't really look like a wall.

[Dale]

do a pattern or something, then apply perspective to it to show the angle of the wall