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[PatDaniels]

C+C

[Dark Method]

I think the render is way too blended. You can hardly distinguish between it and the background. Left is bare, and your text needs work. Keep practicing.

[Papa]

yea that render is overblended...at first i was like wat? theres nothing about halo in this. then i found it.

[kemo]

Dark Method and paproksguitar are right. that render is way overblended. good try though