optimus prime

[RONIN]

c&c please.


this is the stock.








i wanted it to look like he was getting destroyed.

[LoganGFX]

First, you put some fairly cool effects over the render(which is good, helps to kinda blend, especially the right), but didnt really do all that much to the render itself. It needs more blending, and maybe a couple MILD distort filters run, to make it more 'being destroyed'.
And I think the text, while kinda plain, fits where you put it nicely, and even runs with the flow of the sig. You definitely coulda done worse on it, so gj there.
Keep at it though, you can only get better!