logo/splash art for Galatians 2:20

[unit_number_43]

Splash art/logo for the Christian summer camp I'm working with right now. Again, there theme this summer is Galatians 2:20.

[Henry]

the last 0 looks a bit like a nine, and the Galatians is pretty hard to read.
Maybe add some color in there?

Overall great design minus the text issues

[unit_number_43]

I think in most cases I would agree with you about adding some color. However, in this situation the logo is going to be printed on pamphlets and handbooks by the thousands, using a laser jet printer. Keeping it black only means that it will also keep down cost, and maximize the possible background colors.

I didn't notice the 0/9 thing, I guess I am so used to seeing 2:20 I didn't notice. Good catch.

[Dick]

just like said above, i'd change that "20" font and its perfect, and imo those galatians can be read fine.