Absract Industrial + FIRE!

[Papa]

I was bored so i decided to take a bit of photography. I'm not evry happy iwth eitehr picture ot be honest but i did my best...I'm haveing a big problem with getting blurry pictures..ONly 1 out of every 14 pictures i take turn out to be not blurry. Anyways these are my outcomes:



Darkness SHine:
Tbh i have no idea why i put the text on the picture but i did. I'll prolly end up moving that. It's kinda boring, but i liked all the rust and the textures. I made a little bit of Photoshop post work on it after. And I maniped it slightly :/, because I'm not good enough of a photography to get the shot i want on the first try.

FIRE!:
This i did minimal editing to. Its a bit blurry because the fire was moving and also because i can't keep my fucking hands still...



CnC please. Also any tips on photography would be super helpful. Like how to get my pictures not blurry. And reducing grain.

[Papa]

sry for the bump, but i was hopeing to get a comment or two....:/

[stanx]

well i would say something, but i dont rly understand abstract photography, and i never tried to take a pic about fire. soooo idk the composition is not bad on the fire pic, but i think you shouldn't cut it at the middle, it's better to show the whole fire i think, and maybe with a little higher iso, or i dunno. cuz its disturbing that its blurry and everything too dark around it. thats all i can say

[undertone]

im no expert, but i like the second one. remindes me of summer.

[Deadloader]

the first would work a million times better without the text

[Papa]

Thanks for trhe CnC guys I'll edit those soon.

[Neiromaru]

since i don't know how much experience you have with photography i'll give you the most basic advice on lowering blurryness, use a really fast shutter speed, or if you're photographing still scenes just use a tripod.

[Daemon]

I really love the first shot, but it would look better without the text nice pictures m8.

[Henry]

#1 looks really nice, interesting and good textures, but you should get the text out of there, and maybe make it bigger?
i don't like #2 as much, just not very interesting imo