never ending math equation

[undertone]

the song an title really have little relevance to the image, other then i was listening to it while drawing the original sketch.

the first time ive worked at this size, let alone the first large image i've worked on in a while.

http://undertone.pshl2mod.com/the%20...20equation.jpg

[Chris]

interesting concept

[undertone]

thanks, any more comments? please?

[Henry]

i like the concept and the design a lot, but i don't like the bold outline style.

[Chris]

honestly it seems unfinished, I had the urge to ask if any more work was going to be done.....is there?

[undertone]

maybe, i worked on it for a very long time, so i kind of got burned out on it. im trying the bold outline cause when ever i do anything with a thin line people always say it looks like dr seuss, which isnt that bad i guess, but i'd rather look like my own thing.

[Moshiur]

I don't think it's unfinished. I think the piece gets the point through. I like the colors and the shape of the main attraction.
What I don't like is the fact that it's a bit grainy on the background. I'd imagine that it would look better if it was clean
and smooth. Maybe it's just me who sees it grainy. Otherwise, I think it's a nice piece that gets the point through. I like it.

[Papa]

No your right hostile, it seems pretty grainy to me as well. Tho i like it, pretty cool.

[undertone]

thanks, but i think i'll be doing another version of this soon. or not really another version, but like a v2.

[Chris]

only reason i said it seemed unfinished, is because you have ALOT of negative space, kinda swamps the focal point