Some of my stuff...

[HVS]

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3- )bad text

4- REQUEST-> w/

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6- bad

7- wierd style

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9- experiment

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v2-

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12-

13- dont cry, Eclipse is my other name

v2.. just a swirley added

14- not good

15- REQUEST

16- REQUEST w/

17- w/

18-

I guess that's enough for now.. Comments and Crits welcome.

[Scarface04]

I like the last four not so much the first 14. You should work on blending and bringing out your focal point.

[SULEX]

not bad

[Daemon]

I like the last four not so much the first 14. You should work on blending and bringing out your focal point.

Agree Some of them is very hard to focus on, else this is def a good start, keep practise. Also your text could use some work, but the text part is always hard.