Talib Frist in Series

[Bhav]

Talib Frist in my Rapper Series

V1


V2


V3


V4



is it my best and wot version is the best ?

[Bhav]

Bump

[cC.Aleksander]

Sorry, but you wanted CNC:
The text is kinda awful=/
The border is a bit too thick IMO
Just think its a bit boring
Needs work

[Bhav]

ok thanks

[Scarface04]

It seems too sharp to me.

[crs*]

I like the sig overall but i feel there is bits and bobs you can tweak for definate.
Maybe the contrast is slightly high which tends to give the sig quite a solid and hard feel overall in my eyes.

I do like how you have brang all the elements together though Its a good sig, just needs some tweaking

[NSR]

Probably your best, cuz I love V1 colours
I also like the fact that its sharp...
Text is aweful! Really need to work on that, and contrast
Border seems ok, maybe add a cinematic border or experiment with diffrent borders?
Nice work overall...

[Bhav]

ok thx

[Daemon]

I also think you should have faded the sharpness a bit. and colors are a bit boring and very RED/orange. text needs some majour work