Rumples new one

[Rumpleforeskin]

[NSR]

Looks ok. I like the text. Its also got basic flow. The square distortion is kinda too visible. Maybe lower the opacity or change the blending mode. Also needs more effects on the render. ATM, he doesn't blend very well. Colours also needs more work. Maybe add a border or somefin... Overall, I'd say 6/10 but keep at it

[Daemon]

yearh the render needs some mor blending and another border would look good a cenima maybe? the square's area bit to visible keep up